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Reyo Story Contest 1

I was lost.  God how could I be so stupid to split from the search party.  But I'm getting ahead of myself.  The real story starts about a month ago.

Susan Cartolli was last seen outside in her front yard playing silently in the grass of her warm suburban home with her mother, Alice, watching her from the inside, through the only window the kitchenette was able to provide, while she silently washed dishes from breakfast that morning.  Her husband Frank had already gone to work at the office and Susan's brother Kyle had gone to school, Richmand Hill High School, where Alice hoped to send Susan...hoped. 

It all seemed to happen so fast, and yet so slow at the same time, like how the school days can seem short while the whole year takes an entire lifetime.  Alice had dropped the dish soap and made quite a mess on the floor.  She grabbed some dishtowels, mopped the mess up, and looked back outside.  Something was different, however, as Susan's favorite action super-star diva doll, Chloe, was sitting outside, on the front lawn, without susan.

A sudden wave of panic began to arise; she quickly thought to herself 'now this has happened before, she just went to play with her other doll, Sophie'.  And with a quick bolt out of kitchenette and out the front door she remembered that all of her toys where inside of the house, and susan had not yet reached the hight required to reach the door handle, let alone get inside.  'What am I going to tell Frank?!??!' she asked herself as she quickly phoned the police.

Officer Rick Stevens answered the phone in the most monotonous voice conceived by man, somewhat like your English teacher at the end of the day on Friday. "911, please state your emergency and we'll be sure to send help as soon as possible, and if these are the kids from the Davidson residence would you please stop calling, the hiccups are not an emergency." To that Alice replied "OH MY GOD, I think my Susan's been kidnapped!!!". "Oh jeez, uhh...uhh where is your place of residence ma'am?", Steven quickly responded.  "AHHHHHHH *crys* I live a~~"

...This was the sound of the phone going silent, Alice started screaming into the phone trying desperately to get someone on the other end.  And just when she began to flip out her cell phone a large *WHAAM* was heard from the front of the house...the front door went flying past Alice's face, she couldn't help but faint as a silhouette of a man started forcing his way towards her.

~~more if I win ^-^~~

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